All Comments on 'Fight or Flight Ch. 02'

You need to make your chapters longer. You have a good start but you barely get into the story before you end it. Much like a tv show that is always going to commercial. And going back to the bar might not be the best choice since there is a bleeding wound on her neck..... or did everyone just forget about that. Keep writing :)

Keep going! I agree with Azure - longer chapters would be appreciated.