All Comments on 'First Time with Phil'

I love this... I want my first time to be so wonderful! i sooo want cock xxx

The start of the story is VERY confusing, partly I believe because there are so many basic punctuation errors. One cardinal rule: When one person stops talking and another one starts, you MUST start a new paragraph. I got so discouraged with the effort to understand who was saying what and what story elements the narrator brought in that I gave up after about three paragraphs.

Good story, but spelling and grammar mistakes made it hard to follow. The experience was much the same as my first. Believe it or not, it was with a guy named Phil