by Bazzza
Playfully sensual - a soft real touch with words and emotions without bruising thiers or ours.
More Please - Regards
The mixture of hot, steamy, wicked, sex in a good tale told articulately always turns me on.....big time! The proper use of the mother tongue (literally and otherwise) can be fun.
Very good. I like these partner trading stories and I hope that you write a continuation on this one. A suggestion: Perhaps a "third" party could be invented on this one that is not an adult, but perhaps the good doctor would like to try having a baby with you?
Emma agreed to a divorce through adultry by having an affair. Des was to fuck Leanne, while his wife was getting fuck. Des leave Leanne to come watch his wife Emma suck cock and sit on a dick. His wife tells her husband in their house, that a look was all he was ever gone to get. Now that is too nasty.
Well written story with some good erotic sex scenes. The only irritating part was the stupid little scene of Des becoming voyeur for a minute while Emma gives blow job to our hero. Why you felt obliged to add that is beyond me. It added nothing to the story nor did our hero's attempts at humor with Emma. Otherwise a very well written story. Thanks the Ct. Yankee
Very good story! I don't know...do MD women get pregnant on the first time in an affair?
Nice to read a very good story without screaming female orgasms everytime there's bodily contact.
A little love and tendernesss and growth in a relationship sure beats the usual slam bam. I think it's the love and tenderness we all are actually seeking.
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I wonder if the doctor does house calls i have a pain for to cure and i hope yourwriting more of Emma and him i would love to read more chapters of Dr.Rochard.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga
I liked the slow build-up and the low-key yet intense passion involved.
I didn't look at the date you wrote it before making this comment but it must have been a couple of years ago. I hope to find you've continued it but maybe you thought the ending sufficient, which it was really. I'm a sucker for believable love stories and this is excellent.
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I read most of the story but got bored and skipped quite a bit.
I liked the dialog between them. They were having fun with their sex, not reenacting a scene from a porno movie, more like real life or should I say like people who are confident in their sexuality.
This yarn is really well written although there is some text in the middle in need of editing. The plot is very creative, and I liked the twist of the (soon to be ex-) husband popping in to see the wife being fucked. 5 stars and added to my favourites because of the writing quality.