All Comments on 'Following the Feeling Ch. 03'

Lol that was awesome!!! wooot!! Keep it coming, Cricketmuse, you're doing a great job!

Please don't let this story die!!! So many here start and then boom! They die off as the author gets bored, or whatever...

Please don't let that happen to your story. You are doing great. Keep going. I want to see what happens between these two.

I was glad to see you updated! Great addition, can't wait for more!

I can't wait for the next chapter of this! Please keep on writing.

P.S. I really like Grayson!!!

I've just finished reading the chapter and I'm already desperate for the next! Really interested to see how their relationship evolves. Please let the next chapter go up soon!

Way to build suspense. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please, please, please keep writing this story.

THIS was an amazing chapter, and might i add.... IT WAS HOT!

yes i know Kiera and Gray, didnt go all the way that many of us wanted ..... but it was a nice teaser! lol

Please continue asap.

Thanks for the great update! I can't wait for more!

dieing for more!!!! cant wait

Love it so far! please more soon!

loved the story hope theres more to come soon.

Please update!

Please update soon! Your writing style allows one to be completely engrossed in the story. It has provided relief from my college studies.

this is great, keep writing please!

This is a great story! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please post it soon!!! :)

This series is HOT.. its that slow burn you anticipate when you eat an excellent hot sauce.. I love this story please continue I await on the edge of my seat wondering when the author will get a real world writing deal.

PLEASE pretty please with sugar on top write more fast as you can!!!

This is an absolutely fantastic beginning of a series!!!!! I couldn't stop reading, the story and the characters are so intriguing. Thank you so much for sharing this story and i can't wait to read the next chapter....hope it's soon :) Chapter 4 would be a wonderful christmas present for me :)

it was ok derek should have came back into it tho cause it seem he had a strong feeling for her, he wouldnt let go of her hand soo i was waiting for him to come back...

can't wait for more...

i'm completely hooked on this story...it is beyond awesome...its one of the best i've read on here so far...i can't wait for the rest of it...

I can't wait for more of this story, I read it right through!!

FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!! PUHLEEZZZ UPDATE! You've got your readers on edge here! Its been driving me Crazy...I love where this story is going but why havent you updated yet???

you write well!

wow this story is getting good I can't wait to see what happen next.

I love Grey's character b/c you allow him to feel unsure and yet it doesn't take away from his alpha male personality. I really loved the way she fights her emotions too and how for a moment she wasn't using anger to cover up her emotions and allowed other emotions to overwhelm her so completely. It's interesting how this other part of her power works, her being able to pass her feelings along. Would be pretty cool if she allowed the walls to drop while making love. I look forward to them getting together again. I hope we learn more about how her ability started and how she learned to control it. What are the ablities of the other owners of the bar?

Sensual seduction.

Grayson is a different kind of Alpha. His uncertainty about the emotional aspect doesn't detract from his strength as an Alpha. I think it makes him more attractive across the board.

I whole heartedly agree with the comment of Cannd. He's a keeper.

there are not many storys that make my heart race but this is one. excellent!

Sweet,yet so hottt.

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