All Comments on 'Forbidden Heartbreak Ch. 02'

by toffeepopnz

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Suite21menSuite21menabout 10 years ago
Nice

A nice series but this one felt rushed. Plus, rather than 'stalking' her on social media, I would have wanted them to come together a more serendipitous fashion. Sort of like them being in a public place, both alone, absorbed in their whatever, then looking up, seeing each other at the same time. Just my thoughts.

Thanks for writing and posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
loved re-reading that

Hope your life has flourished

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