All Comments on 'Forced Slut'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wish I were her

Turned me on so good!!

captainscarlettcaptainscarlettalmost 17 years ago
POV

The switch from one participant to the other is too jarring. Those transitions could be tightened up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I gave it a 00 - It really wasn't worth that much-

But what else could I do

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

It had potential - some parts are written very well - but it wasn't convincing.

It was obvious very early that it was a lover known to her.

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