All Comments on 'Forced Slut'

by Itzkat

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

It had potential - some parts are written very well - but it wasn't convincing.

It was obvious very early that it was a lover known to her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I gave it a 00 - It really wasn't worth that much-

But what else could I do

captainscarlettcaptainscarlettabout 17 years ago
POV

The switch from one participant to the other is too jarring. Those transitions could be tightened up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wish I were her

Turned me on so good!!

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