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by Falcinator

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lvobrienlvobrienover 11 years ago
continuity issues and really? that much beer?

The story has potential. But honestly, that much beer? As a kinkster, I don't know anyone who safely plays after drinking that much beer. Typos were plentiful and there were continuity issues. The story has great potential with some clean up and fixing. Keep writing.

MickCarterMickCarterabout 1 year ago

Beautifully written with feeling and atmoshere - loved it!

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I like to explore ideas in my stories, sometimes because I think the scene is hot, sometimes because I find the sex to be a way to explore more interesting and/or deeper issues. I frequently write of control and loss of control, including the ultimate loss of control that is...