All Comments on 'Freya's First Taking Ch. 01'

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ham_sandwichham_sandwichover 9 years ago
Good first submission!

I'm interested to see where this goes!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Really Good!!!

Keep going!!!! I want to know what happens next!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

i have read a lot of short stories online and i really like your style and how fluent you are and i am vary intrested in finding out where this go's so im hoping you post more soon.

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