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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Interesting angle

interesting- very aware that you are a woman - whatever that means

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good

Good, but try to cut down on the word "so." It's distracting when everything is so this and so that, especially because it begs the question "so much ... that what?" The man can be hard without being "so hard."

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