by cutiegirl4004
Great story. Hope it is true. Toni needs to abide by your every wish!!! Hope you tell us more in the next stories!!! James
... this has the potential to be very erotic. Don't stop with a tease. You need to write the next couple of chapters. You know where you want to take this story. And your fans want to read them.
R
Very hot! I had to go back and read your original portions of the story. Don't stop now, Toni and I are both waiting.
This has the beginnings of an excellent story!
I'm anxious to read more!