All Comments on 'Fuck, This Girl... Ch. 05'

Five.

Why didn't she tell Marcus that her father knew? She is supposedly in love with him, why wouldn't she give him a heads up?

Owwwwww another sad love story which impresses after cliff girl with her Dreaming of Dax.

Why couldn't this be a three pager??? You're killing me here.....hurry up and post pretty please.....FYI Happy New Year!

More please!!!!

So Ellie decided to get hanged for the happiness of her lover and earn his hatred too and he wouldn't even know. ***sigh** True Love....

Seriously when can we expect the neat chapter??!!!!

No cliffhanger here. Next chapter up soon! ;)

Please Update soon! Like, today would be nice :)

How fucked up is that???? A freakin' man "Gladys Kravitz" blew their shit up!!!! Damn doesn't that just suck like hell for Marcus????

Just tells me that you need to keep your windows closed or be deep in your house if you are gonna fuck so loud your neighbors can hear vociferous praise of your man's sexual prowess. "Nuf said!!!

I did not expect her father's reaction to this extent, she is 18, he is 24 correct? That is a 6 year difference. many marriages are like this or more years in between the two. I wait to see that they get together once she is in college and for her father to realize that they can actually be in love.

Can't wait for the next chapter!.......

please update!! love story. ellie's dad is retarded.

I know this is an old thread but anyone who faults her father must be kidding. While in fantasy this story is hot (which is what this is - fantasy - in this case), in reality the teacher is DEAD wrong for sleeping with her. Yes they are close in age, but she is still his student in HIGH SCHOOL. She shouldn't even be having sex at her age. I do like your writing, though.

I agree with the Anonymous commenter before me. While this story may be the hottest sex story, I agree that Ellie and Marcus shouldn't have had sex in the first place. It's plain illegal! Despite the age difference, teachers should be proper role models to students, not secretly dating one of the students. It's just wrong. So I don't blame Dr Winston for acting the way he is. He doesn't trust Ellie for so many understandable reasons. If I had a daughter like Ellie, she'd be in military school. Otherwise, still love this fantasy story tho,, can't wait to read more.

She shouldn't be having sex at her age...an 18 year old adult? She may be a student, but she is still an adult according to most state laws.

Awww! Don't let him hurt the car!

...but still a 5. Perfectly logical reaction and very realistic. I certainly hit rock bottom when the neighbor went over and confessed.

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