by greenbee
more less than satisfactory chapter.
Can't wait to see where this story's headed! Would definitely like you to write some more :)
This is really, really good!! How come you havent finished it? I think you should :-D
This is an interesting story. Why start a great story and not finish? So unfair to the readers..
It wasn't much of a story. Two very short paragraphs that left you looking for the rest of the story.