by nerd4music
Ok, I don't even know where to begin, so I'll just say: you have me panting on the edge of my seat! I NEED to know what happens next!
This is so good! Write as fast as you can !
Plz, continue. Quickly, preferably.
I knew it was going too smoothly for them. You can't leave it there - you need to update now.
Oh man you have got to update soon! Things were going so well! More Please!!!!
im waitin nery impatiently i may add with the rest of your fans!!!!!!!!!!!! im dying of not knowing what is gonna happen next please hurry with the next part ( & hopefully it will be a bit longer)
I love how Sean and NIna are getting closer, along with Sean roughing up Jake a little. You tell this very well, with great detail. Only thing is that I could see someone getting Sean when he went out to the bodega. The story is very riveting, though.