All Comments on 'Getting Lucky Ch. 02'

I love how Sean and NIna are getting closer, along with Sean roughing up Jake a little. You tell this very well, with great detail. Only thing is that I could see someone getting Sean when he went out to the bodega. The story is very riveting, though.

What a cliff hanger! Oh sheeeeet!

Daaaaamnnn.... Lol

im waitin nery impatiently i may add with the rest of your fans!!!!!!!!!!!! im dying of not knowing what is gonna happen next please hurry with the next part ( & hopefully it will be a bit longer)

please update soon this is sooooo good

Oh man you have got to update soon! Things were going so well! More Please!!!!

I knew it was going too smoothly for them. You can't leave it there - you need to update now.

oh my shit geez please hurry and update soon

Plz, continue. Quickly, preferably.

Ok, I don't even know where to begin, so I'll just say: you have me panting on the edge of my seat! I NEED to know what happens next!

This is so good! Write as fast as you can !