by Jenny_Jackson
Because of your pissy, rude mannered intro, I will NOT be sitting the hell down, and shutting the hell up. I'm instead going to tell you to stay in school, and give you a nice big fat 00. An Amazingly effective turn off.
and I enjoyed reading it. Never mind about the "wet back" comment that anon. made. It fit with the narrator's bitchiness.
The attitude alone would earn the five, but the rest of the story is just as well done. Just enough freaky and creepy without going overboard. Good luck in the contest.
I really enjoyed this! It's both funny and the sex is arousing---
Great job!
I laughed all the way through this! I'm pretty sure I've been to this party but alas, I didn't get laid in the garden! More's the pity. It could have been such fun... Good luck in the contest!
Good story. Freaky in a good way. Good luck with the contest.
Fusionnée
(Abs& Vana)
Mmm, sexy ghost in the garden. I love your humor, Jenn. You're such a bitch! Hahaha!
Good luck in the contest.
makes for a joyful romp. Would never see such a strong female in a fluffy fairy costume, but whatevah....
Unvelievable as your story is, I loved it Satire, a ghost who fucks, and a writer who tells a great story. Bravo.
Just this woman's luck. She meets a great guy that she would probably have left her loser husband for, and he's a ghost! Apparently, he's great at sex too. Damn! Talk about humor though. It was helpful. Very few likable people, aside from her and the previous owner's spirit.
Funny story and satire about our society. Good laugh but I don't know about winding up with the husband afterall....
I loved the story! The sarcasm added just the right touch and (minus the supernatural) haven't we all been to just those kind of parties?