All Comments on 'God Save The Devil Ch. 06'

I will miss waiting for the updates. Solid story.

Your twistz and turnz keep me on the hook - all da time. I love 'em.

Muaaahhhhh.

Your hate is pretty intensely reflected in the story. Lovely narration. 5 star.

I read all Indian stories on Literotica. You take the Crown in Humiliation without writing sex in first 3 stories. Great work. I always feel Erotica is a slow thing but should make you want to do the same thing. Write more it was fun.

one of my fav stories ;)

I had some trouble reading at times but got used to it since I placed words in on my own to help out. Your flow throughout all 6 chapters went marvelously flawless. I greatly enjoyed how you took a once powerful man and reduced him to nothing more than a common cockroach. One that even his wife and own daughters simply look down to him as though he was nothing at all. I am curious to find out what happens to the older daughter after all of that. Does the younger one ever experience what pleasures her mother received?

Would have been okay if minors hadn't been dragged into this otherwise nice revenge plot.

I am waiting for next part or chapters