by strtlr69
Would have been okay if minors hadn't been dragged into this otherwise nice revenge plot.
I had some trouble reading at times but got used to it since I placed words in on my own to help out. Your flow throughout all 6 chapters went marvelously flawless. I greatly enjoyed how you took a once powerful man and reduced him to nothing more than a common cockroach. One that even his wife and own daughters simply look down to him as though he was nothing at all. I am curious to find out what happens to the older daughter after all of that. Does the younger one ever experience what pleasures her mother received?
I read all Indian stories on Literotica. You take the Crown in Humiliation without writing sex in first 3 stories. Great work. I always feel Erotica is a slow thing but should make you want to do the same thing. Write more it was fun.
Your hate is pretty intensely reflected in the story. Lovely narration. 5 star.
Your twistz and turnz keep me on the hook - all da time. I love 'em.
Muaaahhhhh.