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All Comments on 'Golf Lessons'

by Stephen7Redo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
loved it

Great job, fun and erotic at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Story

A bit of let down that Jim didn't get to fuck Sally, otherwise a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nope

hubby didn't get to fuck and was lusting over his wife fucking another dude WHILE his cock was getting sucked. People then wonder why we call cucks closet gays. Not to mention the 3 pages of teasing.

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAyleover 13 years ago
"Golf and sex, two of my favorite things. Could life get any better?"

Great, great story. Thanks! And isn't it good to know that our Anyonymous but prolific commenter has made his own sexuality clear to us AFTER he read your story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Dialogue

The dialogue is very stilted. People just don't talk like that.

Would also benefit from being edited to get rid of a few mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
unrealistic

Anybody else would have fucked Sally at the same time.

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I have been a member of Literotica since 2002. I thoroughly enjoy writing erotica and sharing my work with you. I'd like to invite you to read my growing body of work here on Lit. I'm especially proud of my 'Tuition Time' series and the follow-on series of 'Reese and David'....