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Flattery will get you everywhere.
I hope so sweetie...because I plan on being everywhere on your body.
Mmmmm....sounds good baby!
Sweet dreams!
You too!
With that the two lovers slipped happily into unconscious oblivion with dreams of a life filled with love and contentment.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe "baby batter" part cracked me up so much I nearly peed my pants. Whoops!
maxd01almost 11 years agoI have to agree with some of the other comments. The excessive language sort of ruined it for me. I did like the plot and the whole 'guardian wolf' bit but it almost seemed to go to fast when he decided that, gave her the box, and then bam in the middle of everything proclaimed his love for her.
At first it seemed like it was going to be a slow progression where she would get in trouble and then somehow he would get her out if it. All of that without her knowing it was him but then it accelerated like a train out of control and sort of left me standing there wondering what had happened.
I think if you changed some of the dialog to less porn centered (and the hung like horse bit) it would make this a much better story.
cittranover 11 years agoThen I'll watch porn.
But there's a reason it's called erotic LITERATURE.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI liked the bit about the clan stuff but that's just it. It could've been interesting but the dialogue between the two characters ruined it for me. Like everyone said, it was just corny and porn-like. The characters didn't have any depth to them and without any interesting or likeable characters, the story fails.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThought. I was reading an erotic Novel. Didnt Know i was reading a comedy with bad porn conversation.
