All Comments on 'Gwen's Journey Ch. 03'

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Eric_Shift over 14 years ago

Needs resolving

Lit, its a good story, I really feel for Gwen. But for me just let Gwen tell Steve to fuck up Frank a bit as payback. Then Gwen meets Green Eyes, see if there is anything. And let Gabby get Steve. She likes him. Gwen's just playing the field, stringing him along. Its not fair.

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