by Chazzy123
The fact that they made him cum right in the gym was so hot. And the extra eyes of the other two women from above was over the top. Many men wish something like this would happen IRL. And there might be more men in better shape if it did happen.
I loved both the public CFnm part and the femdom flavor. I think Carl will be a regular at the gym for a while. He might need a special dress code.
Good premise, but if you described what the characters and locations looked like, added some detail for their actions and emotions, and went into the sensations and processes they went through, that'd really help your story be more sexually gratifying by helping us get invested in the characters and immersed in the scene. <3