All Comments on 'Harland Ch. 04'

not sure why the rating is so low, but i just wanted to let you know not to stop writing. this has certainly developed by a simple rush-read.

Thank you for this submission. Although I haven't read the previous parts of this story, it seems to be both well written and hot! Good luck on future stories :)

Harland is powerful and controlling yet loving.

First time reader and enjoyed what I read

And this STORY would have been rated a 5 Stars.

What about a threesome with Harland, Kelly and one of her friends?