All Comments on 'Heart of the Wolf Ch. 02'

Enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for Logan and the Doc to get their asses kicked! I hope Kaine and Jake will be able to help Catie heal from her ordeal too. x

Keep up the good work!

Love N x

Good story. Lots of hints that make us curious

I enjoyed chapter 2 and look forward to reading more.

More more more lol

Cant wait to read more!!! Update soon please!!!

These two dumb pyschopaths deserve whatever cruel deaths that await them. Actually Kaine need to torture them for a long time, death is too good of a punishment for them.

This is a good story so far but I really dont like that they raped her and took her virginity that just seemed a bit much and if when kaine finds her and he is her mate how will they be able to mate she will probably be so disgusted and scared with wat happened to her that she will have a hard time being with him or anyone. so that part just doesn't really make much sense to me. ..besides that in all honesty I do like the rest of the story.

More please, can't wait to see what happens next.

Yeah....more please...and thanks for making it longer this time

Oh my goodness I want more it's so good I love it and you are talented

I hate rape so much. I hope those guys get torn apart, skinned a little at a time and but fucked by the biggest cock on earth just so they know how it feels...then, if they've been tortured enough (like they're begging for death), you heal them a bit and start over. THEY DESERVE NO MERCY AND SHOULD RECEIVE NONE!!!! I look forward to what the wolves do to them in the next chapter.

I am enjoying this.

Be interesting to see what happens when Luka and the others gets there.

I am so excited to see where this story goes. I can't wait for the next update.

Wow, brilliant chapter. Cannot wait for ch. 3. :)

Cant wait to see what happens next!!! Love it so far!

Although this is only two chapters I was hooked. Would love to see more chapters written as I'm curious about what happens next.

More more more please don't leave me hanging!

This is really good! Please keep going!!

I am really enjoying this story please post more as soon as possible :)

I luv this so far , but I most definitely need more. Please post next chapter soon

I'm really enjoying this so far, please don't wait too long before posting the next few chapters!

And then there are cheesy comments like: "owned by none other than Dr. Greg Travis". Unnecessary and overly dramatic phrases takes away from the power of the story.

I wonder if it was really necessary to be so graphic with the rape scene, and whether or not it was really crucial to the plot that catie was raped at all.

I skimmed across the scene, so maybe I missed something, but she made an oddly quiet victim--- no screaming, crying, thrashing, begging, bargaining, or viscous outbursts. And it was weird to me that she kept choosing to fall asleep. Most victims of violent abduction, I think, would be more interested in staying hyper alert to avoid any further surprises from their kidnapper, nevermind that the adrenaline would make it very difficult to find some shut eye.

In other news, how do a (were)wolf's claws pick a lock? They're quite a bit thicker than should fit into any standard lock.

However, if feel some of the details were highly unbelievable such as the diary. Why would would-be rapist keep such a thing at work? Further, why didn't the good guys send another team to the other cabin while they checked out the first cabin?

The dialogue flows well and the plot is good.

please tell me they die a painful death