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Art says, "Your pussy is really ready for finger fucking."
I am videoing all this and tell Art, "Hold off and make her beg for finger fucking."
Kathy keeps saying, "Yes finger fuck me, please finger fuck me, I want to cum, please let me cum."
Cautiously, Art slips his big finger into her pussy and she starts going wild humping his finger. Pat is sucking and pulling her nipples and I am watching all this action and waiting for her to orgasm.
One more finger push or nipple pull makes it happen, Kathy tensed up, cried out a loud "FUCK!" and collapsed.
Art said, "Finally, dam my finger was getting tired."
Pat is still playing with her titties he apparently isn't tired.
"Pat quit playing with her titties, stand up and pull out your cock."
Art grabs Kathy's head, pulls it up and tells her to suck Pat's cock because he was nice enough to suck her titties. Kathy starts to object but Art pushes her head onto Pats cock and says, "Start sucking." Kathy doesn't need much convincing since she loves to suck cock. I have to say it was amazing to watch her suck Pats average size stiff cock.
Kathy deep throats Pat until he shots his load down her throat. She looks up at Art with cum dripping out the sides of her lips and smiles.
He says, "I'm next."
Art picks up Kathy off his lap and puts her onto the floor, then pulls her to her knees. Art drops his pants and pull out this huge cock and motions for her to suck it. Kathy looks at me to put an end to this, after all this was my friend and now she was going to suck his cock.
I just kept videoing, waiting for the action to begin. Art is huge but not erect, Kathy head now pulled to his cock and she begins to suck. She sucks as if it's the best tasting lollypop she has ever licked, about twenty sucks and Art shots his load into her mouth, then pulls out his cock and shots more cum on her face and tits. There is this milky white load dripping from her face down to her tits.
"Lick off all my cum off your tits."
Kathy goes to it as if it was a gourmet treat. After a few minutes, he tells her to stop and sits down on the sofa exhausted. They will not forget this afternoon for a long time. If they do, I have the video.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 9 years agoThe first three parts were exciting with innocent flirting, unexpected flashing, and concern about the feelings of each party. The fourth part unexpectedly turned into a discipline session with Kathy just being passed around. Not the tender sharing I expected the story to end with.
SoleBrotherJeffabout 9 years agoI feel that you developed a beautiful relationship between Kathy, her husband, & Art.
But, in the end, you destroyed the whole thing by introducing Phil & degrading Kathy to being just another female slut.
She's the heroine here, not the whore.
She loves her husband & she wants to console the widower of her best friend.
She's not a whore, she's a loving wife.
I demand a re-write.
Kathy, her husband & Art can have a very loving relationship all by them selves!!!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoYou have some good ideas floating around inside your head, and you've managed to incorporate some skill in your descriptions and the flow of the story. This has the potential of being a good story to read.
But you're not quite up to speed yet in the way you actually *write*. That's not the ideas or plots, it's the way you put them together by using punctuation, the way that you can avoid spelling errors creeping in, and such.
In other words: you have the ideas, but there's a disconnect between your ideas and the nuts&bolts of the way you express those ideas in writing.
Now, you'll read comments all over Literotica about grammar nazis, people obsessing about spelling, and such. Negatives are really easy to throw at a writer and trip them up, and nobody who writes is immune from them. But please, please, re-read your story and look at the punctuation and how its use can change the flow of a piece of writing and turn it into a success or failure. For any writer, any progress is good progress.
thebuffaloabout 9 years agoDon't know exactly what to say. Enjoyed the concept; first sections were a decent read. For me, it fell apart the last section. Read like a totally unbelievable fantasy - and not one that was realistic.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI like nothing better than a woman dressed yet exposed, sexily sublime. Made a most enjoyable read, with the images in my mind!
