All Comments on 'Her First, Her Last, Her Only Ch. 01'

Very nice and very believable!

i just wish there had been more descriptions on the sex... *sad face*

but then i'm just a horny dirty person anyway =P

*off to read more of your stuff*

i'm so glad you left a message on the "Mean Anonymous" board... i love checking out new authors! =D

a littly choppy in spots, but a worthy effort. ;) Keep writing! I'm on to read some of your newer stuff. VA

Keep up the good writing. I would love to read more.

Kind of hard to believe when a female's cherry is on the inside. The minute his dick went in her; the cherry was gone. It's no deeper than the membrane that may or may not be obstructing the vaginal opening.