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... some help from a good Editor and/or Proof Reader!!

You seem to have problems with spelling, grammar and punctuation.

Oh, and check out how to spell the name of a certain make of high-end Sports Cars!

I think you spelled the man's name no less than four different ways alone. You seriously need an editor.

And next time, wait until after you have actually had sex before yoiu attempt to write about it.

I'm just sayin'.