All Comments on 'Hight Art Erotica'

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ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosabout 11 years ago
Get an editor or a spell-checker

And next time, wait until after you have actually had sex before yoiu attempt to write about it.

I'm just sayin'.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I think you spelled the man's name no less than four different ways alone. You seriously need an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Get yourself ...

... some help from a good Editor and/or Proof Reader!!

You seem to have problems with spelling, grammar and punctuation.

Oh, and check out how to spell the name of a certain make of high-end Sports Cars!

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