by xalanz
And next time, wait until after you have actually had sex before yoiu attempt to write about it.
I'm just sayin'.
I think you spelled the man's name no less than four different ways alone. You seriously need an editor.
... some help from a good Editor and/or Proof Reader!!
You seem to have problems with spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Oh, and check out how to spell the name of a certain make of high-end Sports Cars!