All Comments on 'His Conquest'

i loved every second written word of this story. U made me so hot and my desire was on high alert, wish i could be that woman and have a man like that to love me.

please continue UR stories, i know i will be into each and every one of them !!!

Don't get me wrong, I really liked your story, but it was slightly confusing. How much time was going by? Did Ariele know Michael before he kidnapped her? And when did they get engaged?! Very hot writing, but it needs some explaination. Also, don't use the thesaurus so often. Some words didn't fit where you had them... made it a little difficult to understand.

Keep writing! I love your stories! But maybe just pay a little more attention to detail.