All Comments on 'His Tail Tale Heart'

Have her save his life and her life and get them both out of that cell, that would be awesome

is "his tail tale heart?"

Explanation: I just thought it sounded sort-of cool... I didn't anymore thought than that, so don't be over-analytical please. I could rename it, but that could be confusing when i write the other chapters....

It's an interesting start - imprisoned innocents & weres, nefarious sadists. But you need an editor or to refresh your writing with an editing rules list and proofread. There are some misspelled words, awkward word choices and sentences. It would be much better with a bit more polish to it.

Interesting characters. I am assuming that Alyssa is a non-shifter. Keep writing, I would like to see how this develops.

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I would definitely love to see more and see this story progress. Intriguing indeed. ^.^