All Comments on 'His Wish Ch. 01'

more please!

I try not to be too critical of others since I haven't written anything in a long time. I thought this story was far too short however like me I'm glad you keep it open-ended by having a setup that has nearly limitless potential. Just don't leave me hanging next time. If you need more added on, I'll contribute but let you get the credit.

I should be on the Editor's List if you want

You have the power to have any body,and you pick your old girlfriend,that damped you. I would want revenge! I would be pist off.I would have her masturbate with very large object,make her feel pain,like he gave me.