All Comments on 'His World'

While I certainly don't like violent Master/slave relationships (in real life and in stories) I'm have a feeling this story will end on a slightly lighter note and I definitely hope it does. Please post the rest of this story so that Raiyne may have a happy, loving and healthy relationship that may possibly include a safer and saner BDSM aspect.

ok.. to be totally honest Jareth was a little psychotic... i think the writer was shooting for that little fact and if so it was right on target... the female in the storyline is coming across as more pathetic than a slave... i am hoping she drops the slave routine and finds something she is more suited for but i have a feeling jareth won't let her go just yet....maybe she will introduce jamie to jareth? hey guess what????? when you think about the story this much I am thinking the writer did a good job of telling her storyline... great job! Jane

Is the point. Bad waste of bum wipe.