Holly's Day of Dreams

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hrshie40
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As his fingers slide deeper into her she no longer cared about the past but cared only about the endless possibilities of the future.

hrshie40
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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
This 'had been' a good story

A great story, though the word 'had' was used far too many times. It definitely got in the way of the language. And nearly got in the way of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
It is rare that I enjoy a story this much.

The author really needs to pat them self on the back. This story was very interesting to me. For one it felt like you had to be there while writing it. Your details really brought it all to vivid life for me.

I also like your main character. It was nice to see something other then the blond DD cookie cutter character that shows up so often. I think that makes it more real and allows the reader to accept some of the more out there and crazy things that happen in the story.

I will be reading your other works soon. Good job, and keep your stories coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Holly is my kind of Co-Ed

I think I may have to switch colleges and majors!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More More More!

There will be more. There has to be more. Please for the love of all that is dirty, nasty, and sinful let there be more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Story even if I do say so myself.

You did such an awesome job on this story. I can't read it with out getting wet! I LOVE it. The comment that said 5 stars is not enough was totally right!

xoxoxox

Thanks for this wonderful work of erotic fantasy. :)

Holly

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