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As his fingers slide deeper into her she no longer cared about the past but cared only about the endless possibilities of the future.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoA great story, though the word 'had' was used far too many times. It definitely got in the way of the language. And nearly got in the way of the story.
Anonymousover 14 years agoThe author really needs to pat them self on the back. This story was very interesting to me. For one it felt like you had to be there while writing it. Your details really brought it all to vivid life for me.
I also like your main character. It was nice to see something other then the blond DD cookie cutter character that shows up so often. I think that makes it more real and allows the reader to accept some of the more out there and crazy things that happen in the story.
I will be reading your other works soon. Good job, and keep your stories coming.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI think I may have to switch colleges and majors!
Anonymousover 14 years agoThere will be more. There has to be more. Please for the love of all that is dirty, nasty, and sinful let there be more!
Anonymousover 14 years agoYou did such an awesome job on this story. I can't read it with out getting wet! I LOVE it. The comment that said 5 stars is not enough was totally right!
xoxoxox
Thanks for this wonderful work of erotic fantasy. :)
Holly
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis site is having a Halloween Story Contest. Why isn't this story in that contest? It brings back memories of my party days at OU. Which reminds me the big Halloween Party is just around the corner. Maybe I will return for memory sake. You sure have me thinking about it with this story.
Anonymousover 14 years agoDifferent last name. I am just imagining you changed the names to protect the not so innocent. I would love to see this turned into a series. You left a lot of door that could be opened. Any chance we will see more with these characters? I see you have other stories with different characters.
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis story was great! I loved the setting and the set up. I would love to hear more of Holly's adventures at Ohio University. I am sure she didn't stop after her day of dreams. Please say you have more for us.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI am so sorry to say that the highest rank I can give is the 5.0 or 100%. I wish you the happiest of Halloweens and request you continue Holly's dreams. Others must remember her and still desire her for their selfish pleasures. How about starting with the father/son teaming up on Holly in a nc/reluctant scenario. The possibilities are endless. Thank you.
Anonymousover 14 years agoGreat story!!! Thanks. It brought memories of Ohio into
vivid memory.
