All Comments on 'Hollywood Noir Ch. 04'

I love the description of the males mental submission and giving up. The only thing that could make your stories better, for me, would be more detailed description of the physical whipping on their bodies and the results of the whipping and the same for when they are poked and prodded by the women's high heels. That would be the icing on the cake.

But thank you for some great stories.