by SpoiledRedhead
You are SO talented at describing emotions even more so than the sex, which, by the way, is totally awesome. It's so apparent that you've done this before; you describe it perfectly. At least, perfect as it would be from my point of view.
Ben at benawriter@gmail.com
Loved it, was happy to see a new one after reading Lollipop some time ago.
It was well worth the wait.
Descriptive, tantalizing, emotional. (and very very hot) wow.
The way you built the anticipation was great you have a way with words. That was wonderful.
...I need to find a lady like the main character in this story. ;) Great to fantasize about!
A full five for my 'money' and officially the most sensual thing I have ever read on this site. (not that I go out of my way looking for it.)
Opened my mind to the way a woman might want a man (the licking) and actually made me a little sad that nobody has ever licked me. Then again being slightly more hairy than the average Wookie, it is understandable.
Congrats on the story Red