All Comments on 'Hooked (audio version)'

Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed it very much. I thought the writing and the audio were both excellent. I plan to read more of your work and look forward to more audio postings.

oldog

What an amazing narration, amazing story, amazing writing. As an author myself, I know how hard it is to keep a readers attention, let alone give goose bumps and keep your reader completely riveted... Great story 125!

Outstanding. Your adjectives following the afterglow scene were over the top killers!! Good job.

I love a happy ending...literally!

You should be applauded, the narration was excellent and the background music and sound effects were the icing on the cake, very professionally produced. I read the story whilst listening to the audio, which worked very well for me.

With you permission I will be borrowing, 'lustquake' and 'mega-gasms', these so need to be added to the Oxford-English.

The characters worked well, Bella came across as very sweet and naive with an air of innocence despite her not so innocent occupation and Zach's dry wit amused me. The humour running throughout your story, kept it light and very readable, a real feel good story.

Thoroughly enjoyed your audio. You conveyed the passion from each character. Please do more, add females to voice their parts?