All Comments on 'Hormonal Surges Ch. 06'

you are badly in need of an editor ,the bad grammar and missing words really slows down the reading .Since you made a big deal out of her trying the food, it would have been great if she explained what everything tasted like ......just saying.

The story is great ! Different ,and refreshing . Thanks for sharing it with us .

Stephen J

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I am really enjoying your creation. I love how the story is unfolding, and wonder where it will lead for our soon to be mated pair.

You have me addicted to this series. Thank you!