All Comments on 'Hormonal Surges Ch. 11'

by oceaneyes22

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please!!!!

Can you please stop writing one pagers please make the stories longer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Longer stories please

Redmoon_ElzRedmoon_Elzalmost 12 years ago
This is killing me!!l

Love the story ! But the one pagers per day are killing me!!! Lol keep em coming !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
please!

please write more than one page!!!! please!!!

Archangel_MArchangel_Malmost 12 years ago
Fascinating

This a very interesting and compelling story, and I'm looking forward to reading more. Don't listen to the people whining about chapter length--you're the author, and you decide such things. :)

That said, you have a truly horrendous case of Spell-Check Syndrome going here. Or, to put it more simply, you need an editor just like any other author. It's easy to find one through the Lit volunteer editor program, so I'd encourage you to look into that.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous