All Comments on 'Hormonal Surges Ch. 11'

by oceaneyes22

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Archangel_M about 12 years ago

Fascinating

This a very interesting and compelling story, and I'm looking forward to reading more. Don't listen to the people whining about chapter length--you're the author, and you decide such things. :)

That said, you have a truly horrendous case of Spell-Check Syndrome going here. Or, to put it more simply, you need an editor just like any other author. It's easy to find one through the Lit volunteer editor program, so I'd encourage you to look into that.