by radassat
than the opposite--Your tale is certainly NOT EROTIC to normal people
This story is centered on two themes, manipulation and abuse. BDSM is nowhere in this story. It's a demented story anyway.
Why didn't he simply leave when she got out of the car? When she used, abused, assaulted, tortured and humiliated him why didn't he simply give her a bloody lip and walk out? What. you think she's going to overpower him? She's lucky if he doesn't beat the snot out of her. That would have been my choice. What a bitch. Terrible, unbelievable story.
Great story - the only weakness was the speed of putting on and taking off the cock cages. Get some experience with cock cages and adjust your story. For example, at the end of the story you should have had her lock him in a cage before he left.
Submissive men are easy victims to criminal rapists as their fetishes can be used against them. It is still rape and not a turn on. The story could use some simple re-write for the dom to get consent along the way by exposing the submissive nature of the male step by step. No need for the abuse as it taints an otherwise great story. The struggle should be the male deciding for himself what he wants by being given simple choices to submit. The sexual acts and S&M acts in the story could still remain as-is, but there needs consent by the part of the male so the story doesn't come off as a creepy rape fantasy.
I love the fact he falls into her trap and becomes so submissive so fast. I wish that there had been more detail and better grammar. Certain areas of the story were hard to read. I loved the cockpumping torture!
Awesome story, wish I was her slave, she can do to me as she wishes
This story is a fine example of how BDSM is abuse and promotes rape culture.
I hope people who practice this barbaric act seek out a psychiatrist or counselor.
Honestly fuck you if you are turned on by BDSM
Everyday we stray further from God's light
BDSM can be a fun and useful tool for a couple who love each other to learn how far the other person can and wants to play It should never go beyond limits and never be abusive or physically beyond levels negotiated by each person. Never go beyond a time limit. Never go beyond a physical need limit. Be good to each other and respect your relationship.