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Click hereOne of the young attorneys said, "Yeah, your are very right, there. Those two ran Beth Meyers out of town just for taking Lorna's case."
After a few more speeches, the dance band cranked up the music. Hutch rose, took his bride by the hand and led her out onto the dance floor. The first dance was rather slow. He gathered his wife into his arms and as they swayed to the music he said, "You did a fantastic job on your speech tonight, my dear."
Lorna looked up at her husband and whispered, "That's because I have a superb speech writer who also happens to be the love of my life. He even coached me through the preparation. I felt good, confident in its delivery. Thank you, Norm."
"I love you, Lorna."
"I love you, too. I will never stray away from you, again. Not ever..."
- COMMENTS
NoBullAl4 months agoNot a bad story proving you like RAAC all the way!!!
It is, however strongly suggested that you get an editor with a strong knowledge of the English language and the ability to properly spell words!! One of the words that particularly turned me off was the use of the word “gravel and gravelling”!! FYI gravelling means the spreading of gravel or sand as in to gravel a roadway!! On the other hand the most likely word that should have been used is “grovel or grovelling” as in “She was grovelling on the floor!!!” There were many others but this is a good example!!!
onbothsides5 months agoI know that Hutch has influence and power. How much of it did he have to use to get a high school senior into Harvard Law? just curious.
bobareenoabout 1 year agoI hope Lorna’s graveling was not too painful. She might have tried to grovel, instead.
Wargamerover 1 year agoA very average story about a cuck and a very stupid bitch.
He took her back, the slut deserved to be cut loose.
Ordinary work
3/5
bigurnalmost 2 years agoFor a man with so much influence and power... Hutch was a weak willed little bitch, when it was time to defend his family. He never should have let the situation go so far with his wife and Burns.
secretsalover 2 years agoLorna acts clinically stupid, and Hutch seems like a borderline sociopath. Leaves his wife and daughter with a predator, lets him do what he wants, just so he can condition their behavior for the future. If it was a sly attempt to expose lawyers as having no conscience, it might have been fun, but instead it just seems like a botched story with wafer-thin characters.
tazz317almost 3 years agoin keeping family together through all types of behavior. TK U MLJ LV NV
BuzzCzaralmost 3 years agoI go hot and cold on stories that are written using vernacular. If it's done well it can add charm and realism to a story. This one made me cringe. It's a shame this writer's favorite word is "Ah". It had to be used 100 times or more. Numerous errors added to the difficulty in staying the course. Add in the all-powerful, superhuman big-dicked, rich, all-knowing protagonist and this went the way of the Titanic.
26thNCover 3 years agoReading again. Not the best story ever, but I definitely like Hutch's revenge on Ken and everyone associated with him.
