by penasweapon
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Work on your writing skills.
Your writing: As my head cleared I realized that I was alive.
Example of showing: I felt my head clearing. Was I alive? Of course I was, the question proved it.
All the conversation is she/he said. You should use quoted dialogue.
"You son of a bitch," the scraggly old guy screamed. "It's your fault. You turned right into me."
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