by penasweapon
Turn both mother in law and wife into cock sucking sluts, and cum dumps. Thanks for the good story
Work on your writing skills.
Your writing: As my head cleared I realized that I was alive.
Example of showing: I felt my head clearing. Was I alive? Of course I was, the question proved it.
All the conversation is she/he said. You should use quoted dialogue.
"You son of a bitch," the scraggly old guy screamed. "It's your fault. You turned right into me."
Cant wait for you too follow-up. Would be nice to have MIL and Wife as his willing Slaves. Doing any and everything to get his Cock!