by fanfare
...of the narrator. The mild expletives mixed with the big words made for a fun read. (You commented on a story of mine in March. Sorry for the delay in returning the favor!)
I read this to accompany your latest -
Kinda, sorta, tongue in cheek, you think?
And, quite the twist at the end.
Which makes it difficult to put into any context.
Anyway - better, if less engaging in an odd way.
Green-something
not much sex in your tale but that is ok the swingers were put down before they
got started . a hint of low life coming to the tale. maybe a little dull for the beat off
people. sorry but I do not think this will be rated very high by the people who
read stories on this site not a bad tale just not sexy enough for readers here.