All Comments on 'I Love You'

by missuslovett

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
MacDukeMacDukeover 17 years ago
Intense Passion

You have succeeded in conveying an intense passion for your lover. Very good first story. Cut down the longer paragraphs a little next time and describe the players more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow!

Did you deserve your spanking...? That makes it all the more sweeter huh?

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous