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Ludvine stood just inside the door, far from Jezebel's reach. Jezebel sat on the bed glaring at her nemesis.
"You pushed him to far this time, I mean really Jezebel trying to starve your own baby to death." she shook her head
"He won't believe you, he knows me better than that."
"He knows you tried to abort the baby, why not try starving it?" she snickered. Jezebel rose to her full height than walked as close as her chain would allow. Ludvine still stepped back even though she knew Jezebel couldn't reach her.
"It won't work." she said calmly watching Ludvine back out of the room,
"You're wrong, you don't know him anymore. He hates you Jezebel, trust me, he WILL believe It." she grinned than slammed the door closed.
"No he won't." she said even though Ludvine was already gone. There was no way in hell he would believe her load of lies! Jake knew her better than anyone, besides Jenna.
Than suddenly she felt a nervous tension begin to clench her muscles. What if by some remote chance Ludvine was right? He had abducted her from the abortion clinic; he was definitely under the impression that she did not want the child. Jezebel was also convinced that Ludvine had exploited her superior sense of manipulation to back up her accusations.
But if it turned out that Jakub Stone actually believed that conniving bitch, there would be HELL to pay!
- COMMENTS
THELOVELY1GLOover 12 years agotime around, and I still love this series, looking for a much Needed update!
Anonymousover 15 years agoif he does sleep with the maid it will truly ruin the story and it would lose its touch . plus jezebel wont 4give him
Anonymousover 15 years agoplease note there is a difference between "than" and "then"...other than that I have absolutely no complaints :)
ebonygriotover 15 years agoMy score reflects my appreciation of your writing skills not my agreement of what is happening in the story. You have captured the torment and toxic childhood experience of Jake very well. You give a realistic portrayal of angst that Jezabel went through in deciding to have an abortion. Where this falls down is Jake using his intelligence / common sense. He hasn't thought to call a doctor to check on a woman in the most vulnerable stages of pregnancy? As previous posters have highlighted, why no surveilance cameras & audio recorders. He is in a business where these would be used. You have done a brilliant job of creating an enthralling yet disturbing tale. There is a dark authenticity in the line that Jake has crossed. His character is wrong but is like a rolling stone caught in the moment of going down hill fast.
Anonymousover 15 years agoWhat is disturbing about this story is that Jake will not listen to reason...yes she shouldn;t have tried to have an abortion but now she will lose the baby anyway. Whay haven't any of the staff over heard the comments that Ludvine has made to Jezebel and I agree with the other post about cameras in the room or something. Thanks looking forward to reading where this story ends hopefully Jake will talk with Jezebel so that she can explain whats going on. ALso what about a doctor to check on her to make sure that she and the baby are doing ok. Thanks
mrskelleyover 15 years agoWhat the???? Why has he not went to heck on her...and Ludvine needs to go! Great update.
Anonymousover 15 years agoIF jake is so rich and stuff and wants to keep an eye on her to make sure she doesnt and isnt hurting herself...UM why didn't he put in a camera? Ya know survaillance? that way he'd inevitably find out about Ludvine and jezebel
Anonymousover 15 years agoTHIS STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME. I JUST LOVE IT PLEASE, PLEASE KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!
cantfightfateover 15 years agoThis is not my kind of story. I read it because I like some of your other work. I was horrified by the first chapter, then read the second because I hoped it would do a 180. I don't really like this story but I read every chapter. It's crazy. Jake is a psychopath and despite his background, I can't forgive him for his actions. He became everything he hated about his father in the first chapter when he almost killed the woman he 'loves'. I don't now... this whole story violates my idea of what love is. Obsession to the point of madness, definitely. A desperate kind of craving, sure. But I don't know if something so destructive can be classified as love. I've given you a 75 because even though the story repulses me, I keep coming back for more, so that must mean something. I don't know if a happy ending can come of this, when Jake is not capable of rational thought when it comes to Jezebel. And I don't see how she can possibly forgive any of the things he has done to her. All I can hope for is that she gets out and that both receive help. Thanks for writing.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI kinda like this story and kinda don't. But God help me I can't stop reading it lol. I hate hate hate Ludvine!! I agree with everyone here, that bitch needs to go. And Jake better not give in and sleep with her either. He does need to grow a pair and just go talk to Jezabel.
