by Max121
The gay male situation doesn't do much for me, but to each his own. I think the story is well written and very erotic.Thanks for the post......Rich
The story was good so far. But the direction you seems to be heading quickly made me loose all interest. Gangbangs and groupsex is the biggest turn off I have. One active male in a story is enough. I don't fancy either lesbian or gay action either, so there's not much left for me in this story it seems. Had you stayed on the originial path I suspect you would had a lot more readers and better scores. Readers like some degree of predictability.
Just went from a great story to a bad story in half of a page
Done reading this here