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All Comments on 'I Spy'

by persorosa

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yummmm

Great start. Love to see more....

simaddictsimaddictover 12 years ago
I liked it

I loved the characters and liked the story very much - but it ended too soon, just when things were getting good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Stopped too soon

I loved your story, great beginning. Just when it started to get going you stopped. You need to have a part two.....I know your working on one right now. Can't wait to read it.....hmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I agree with a previous comment

You definitely need a chapter 2 because the story stopped so abruptly.

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