by VanessaEvans
I loved both installments. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I voted 5 stars and added you to my favorite author list.
I think Claire should attend a school reunion. Please continue her story. Thanks
much enjoyed
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biggest problem with this style / type of story
is the speed & intensity of the journey ,
if you go to slow , the writer & reader get bored
if you go to fast you reach the point at which it either becomes repetitive or you plunge over the cliff edge into situations beyond where the writer or reader is comfortable ..
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this was an interesting , intriguing & engaging tale
sure to stay in the readers mind for some time
I loved the story. I thought that you did
A good job of giving us lots of fun and
Interesting details of your exciting punishment.
I cannot wait to read more. Thank you.
I definitely would like to read more not only work things happen and more of her classmates doing more to her and her friend jade getting a bit more of mistress to her. And become friends with Tony!